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Originally Posted by eeemen
Bro TS, I enjoyed reading your story, it flows smoothly and descriptive enough to make me feel part of the flowing story line. Somehow, I feel like I'm in it as well! Well narrated and the pace is just right. Not just wham bang thank you ma'am style of writing. Lots of passion shown. Well done bro. One of the better written story.  Thanks & cheers bro .............. |
THanks for the compliment... it flows because im trying my best to write in chronological order... i feel chronological details are the hardest to sort out when it comes to recollecting past events!