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Old 18-09-2023, 09:04 PM
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Re: It changes everything....

while some bro think my story so far is a bit long winded, it is important that i start really from the very beginning. There are many emotions in this, and the readers deserve to know how it develops, the various turning point, and how the many incidents unfold.

If you are looking for a direct straight into action kind of story, this is not what you are looking for for

I do promises actions, but it will come in as the story develops. It didnt just happen to me just like that. many happened in between that leads to what happened in the end