Winter Sonata
 

Hey all,

Been reading many many stories in the forum. I admire Harrier for his wonderful exploits man. I have to say that I love ijeetpoon's wonderful stories. It reminds us so much of days when we were all young. So here goes nothing. Its my own story... Please do understand that its a rather long story so I will have to start from the beginning. The beginning will be a little boring.

DISCLAIMER: If anyone of you can't stand it, please your views on this thread so I can stop posting.

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This story tells the passionate and amazing relationship between two secondary school students. They were both young and impetuous.

Coming from a good school, I was young and confident. In fact, I was confident to the extent of being cocky. These were bolstered by looks which I thought were pretty above average and a reasonable good family background. Lame, of course I know but hell man, when you were young that’s how the world works.

Being young, I never understood the efforts my male friends put into chasing girls. My world was about street fighters, drinking and smoking. Anyone still remembers Street Fighters? Haha Well, there was a classmate of mine who was just average in the looks department. I found her immensely irritating. On the day of orientation…

Hi, can I have your number?
Why? Its okay, we can talk in school.
Come on, I just want your number so we can contact each other regarding school matters.
(I had no choice man, come on… I can be cool but not unfriendly. I would be rude if I rejected her.)
errr….Okay then. (showing a black face)
my number is 6235 35 35. Don’t call me unnecessarily okay?.
I spun and walked off quickly. I could feel her watching me longingly at my back.

Over the course of months, I would be really cold towards her and basically, I got the idea. I knew she was interested. I just wasn’t though. During the vacations, she went for a deportment class and also got to know a few friends who were rather hip.

When we met again during the term, I was speechless. Hell man…she brought the wonderful story, The Ugly Duckling to life man. She dressed really differently. From nerdy, she became a little sexy and seductive. She also put on make-up. The way she sashayed…

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Thats a start Bro...
y dun u keep it coming??!! :)

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Haha i will try. Its hard doing that cos I have low cubicle walls. I am not trying to diao qi lai mai... Its just a kind of like a journal where when you remember something you write... Will continue soon, thanks for your encouragement. :)

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Nice narrative, keep it on :cool:

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mayb save in on Word first then cut n paste later.... not so obviuos rite... :)

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When I saw her during the term, she completly changed. From a nerdy girl, who dresses only in jeans and polo tee and thick spectacles she was transformed in a rather pretty girl.

She was dressed a little seductively and sexily and started wearing short skirts. Without her spectacles, I could observe her face closely and man... did i realise she was rather pretty! I could have kicked myself in the butt for not accepting her. Her beauty stirred the sleeping heart in me awake!

Now I understand why guys love girls so much. Thanks to her wonderful deportment instructor, the way she walked is so much more graceful and seductive. She learned to walk confidently and more sexily.

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Okay will do that at home. Just that my line of work doesn't require MS Word more of proprietary software haha Anyway, will try to write at home in MS Word. :)

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It was a thunderous and rainy day. If not for a presentation that i had to give, I wouldn't have bothered turning up in school at all. Alas! The sleepy me woke up when I saw her coming up the bus.

For the presentation, she was dressed in a formal white top and short skirt and stileto. As it was pouring, she was totally drenched. The skirt she was wearing had a slit by the front (I think bros here will remember that a few years ago, skirts with slits by the front and side were the rage). As she walked towards me, I was still dreaming!

Dreaming of what??? :rolleyes: Well, she was walking towards me in a very sexy manner. Instead of responding to her presence by looking at her face, my attention was drawn to her fair, smooth and long thighs! The tight short skirt accentuated her pert gentle curves. Thank to the rain, the translucent top left little to imagination.

I felt a gentle stirring in my loins. It was throbbing gently and rocking my breath gently like a boat on waves. It came strong and went off gently.

Hello?? Koites are you there? She waved her hands in my face. I was still staring at her top. Oh shit... I snapped out of it and spoke to her making small talk along the way, hoping she didn't discover my 'attention'.

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For the next few months, I regretted rejecting her and tried very hard to sian her. In the process, I fell very deeply in love with her. The worse was that she led me on for months and I tried even harder.

Finally, after 1 year of work, she told me the truth. She wasn't interested in me anymore. Boy was I devastated!

This was during the vacation and I found a job in an office just to bury myself in work to forget all my sadness. It was really a hard time. It so happened that time, I met her. My new love. I spent quite a fair bit of effort chasing her.

Angel had shoulder length hair and big eyes. Most importantly, we clicked very well. We would at each other's jokes. We were so in sync man. Before long, we went steady.

The first few months were sweet. I would meet her outside her school and we would go shopping. However, beneath that innocent facade, there was something hidden. She was actually really wild.

It was this fateful day, when we were in a taxi, seated in the back seat. She said she wasn't feeling well and leaned her head on my shoulder. Before long, I started feeling warm and bothered. I was utterly confused and wondered what happened.

As I looked down at her, I saw her blowing warm air gently on my neck. It was very very slow and gentle and she kept her beautiful big eyes closed. With her eyes closed, her long eye lashes were dancing gently over her eyes and looked so sexy doing that. My heart skipped a beat man. Now I know why some girls with long eye lashes and big eyes make guys go va va voom.

I got really warm and unbuttoned the top button of my school U. Uncle, leng ki zhin lua, kui ka tua ey sai bor? Ah di, leng qi kui bian tua liao la. Li wu huat sio bor?

On hearing that, Angel grinned still with her eyes closed. I whispered into her ears, you naughty girl! She got up and wanted to whisper into my ears. Who knows, she continued blowing gentle breaths into my ears and as the driver negotiated a sharp right bend, she bit my earlobe. I had to clear my throat to ask her to stop....

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I can sense a good one coming. Good descriptions and choice of words, man. I await with bated breadth your next instalment. Thks

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Good story well written, can continue and write a longer one... cheers

Jay

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Bro good effort there just to bring us the story....
keep it coming bro.....
will be standing by for yr story... :)

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As this was my first real relationship, I was still very shy. Do you know how it feels? You are very turned on and yet you don't know what do? I was at a loss man. I was so relieved that the taxi came to a stop.

I walked her up the staircase and gave her a gentle peck on her cheeks. I turned her around and Angel looked at me with her big beautiful eyes. Her beautiful eyes were so watery that i could see the reflection of the opposite HDB flat in her eyes.

First, we nibbled each other's lips gently. Her tongue darted into my mouth and I froze. Soon after, I kissed her back. We closed our eyes and as we kissed like long lost lovers, our breathing got heavier and heavier.

The inner region of her mouth was beautiful. It was smooth, moist (not wet) and yet a little warm. It feel so good and tantalising having my tongue in her warm gentle mouth. As I opened my eyes and looked at her, I could literally eat her whole!

She pushed away playfully, and left me catching my breath hard...She really is my Angel!

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I walked her to her doorstep, half expecting her to invite me in to continue our rendezvous. I was waiting waiting...Angel asked, "Aren't ya gonna see me right to my doorstep?" I was damn stupid, I said, "Aren't ya already at your doorstep?" oh my god...can't believe how slow i was...

She said with a wink, "But I don't sleep on THIS doorstep, do I?" I laughed at myself and walked into her apartment. Ho Say Liao!! She told me to close the door after me and I did. But my sweaty palms slipped and I ended up slamming the door instead :eek: She looked at me and said, god, why are you so impatient?

I walked her to her slowly and we hugged each other tightly. Through the thin fabric of our school uniforms, I could sense two humps pushing themselves against my chest. I pushed back, hugging her even more tightly... This time we could see feel each's heart beats. Yes, such was the passion between the two of us. At that moment, nothing could separate us.

Angel bewitched me with her big eyes again and broke away from the hug. She undid her long hair and I could smell the fragrance of the shampoo in the air man. It was heavenly and believe it or not, it was intoxicating!

I couldn't stand it anymore, I pulled her by the waist towards me aggressively. We frenched like no tomorrow and our tongues were fighting hard inside each other's domains. With her sweet breath and intoxicating hair, I sensed a reaction down south. It was coming in between us and pushing my waist from hers. At this point, she clenched her arms around my waist even more tightly. The feeling was intensified and I could sense that a spot was becoming bigger and bigger and wetter. So wet that my manhood was totally drenched. I couldn't take it anymore, my hands started to tickle her ears and her neck.

She inserted her pinkie into my ear canal gently and slowly and it sent shudders down my spine. I could electrical currents coursing itself up and down my lower spine and moving forward. I totally lost control of myself, with my ears shut tightly, I grunted and took in several deep breaths in quick succession.

She turned me around and hugged me from behind. As she ran her fingertips around my taut and toned chest, I could feel the electrical current travelling up from my lower spine to my nipples. I could feel them becoming colder and colder and harder and harder. She then slipped her fingertips into my gaps between the buttons and I was yearning for more. Inside my mind, I was screaming, "come on quickly, hit the buttons!"

Just at that critical moment... :eek:

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Cliffhanger liao....
or break for advertisements? jk bro... :D
nice story so far....