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Spurslover
09-06-2006, 11:38 AM
Hi All Seniors and Bros,

This is my first try, hope that all of you can tolerate if the story is no good, please dun zap me. But if it is not bad, enjoy. Thank you for your understanding. Thank you.

Here goes...

Part 1
I was looking forward to my bachelor party ever since the wedding date was fixed. The thought of me and a few of my friends drinking, watching x-rated movies, a stripper or strippers, and probably things will go beyond stripping. As the actual date for the party draws nearer, I am getting excited with anticipation.

My best man was the man in-charged of making the arrangements for the bachelor party. Finally the date arrived and only three of my buddies could make it. Bachelor’s party eve was spent catching up on things and the actual day got off to a leisurely start. The bachelor party was planned to be an all evening kind of thing.

My buddies have arranged it in a friend’s house (with his parent out-stationed) and I arrived with the best man. When I arrived, the rest of the guys were watching porn. I screened the house and realized that there is no woman around. I asked my buddies what time they arrange for the stripper to show up. Their first reaction was "What stripper?!!!” Deep down, I know my buddies will not just restrict my bachelor party to drinking and porno movie. I kept pestering them until they said she will be here soon.

We started drinking and continued watching porn. An hour later, my hand phone rang, it was my fiancée and she wanted to know if what I am doing and I was, umm… getting things ready for tomorrow. We talked for a minute or so before she hanged up. After hanging up the phone, the best informed us the stripper is on the way. We all cheered and started asking questions about her. I was told that it was an acquaintance.

Soon the door bell rang and I went to answer it. I opened the door to see a masked lady (that type of mask used by wrestlers) standing there. She stepped inside and looked around the room, without saying a word. The TV was still playing porn and she looked at it for a few moments before putting down the bag she was carrying and takes off her coat. She was wearing a very tight t-shirt with a pair of very fitting short shorts and she wasn't wearing a bra. She looked extremely hot, man!!! She intentionally bent over and reached into her bag, giving us all a chance to check out her nice ass and legs. She pulled a CD from her bag and handed it to me, which I then put into the player. She began to slowly dance around the room, moving very sexily, running her hands over her body, and looking extremely hot.
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1) Please let me know if I should carry on?

jng1103
09-06-2006, 11:54 AM
interesting.... pls carry on

Spurslover
09-06-2006, 01:45 PM
Part 2
I was already turn on by her attire as well as her dance. She danced slowly past each and every one of us and then to the center of the room. Once in the center and began to rub her breasts. Her nipples were hard! Then she slowly pulled the shirt upwards and paused teasing us like an expert, we held our breath as she took the shirt completely off. She has very sexy tits (B+ cup) and they looked extremely hot today. The whole site just made me even more excited.

She stood there and rubbed her tits as she swayed to the sultry music, she leaned forward so that we could get a good look at her breasts. She then began removing her shorts. Underneath she had on a very sexy g-string that barely covered any of her pussy. She dropped her shorts to the floor and turned around to show us her bare ass with the g-string between it. She moved her ass to the music, then bent forward, giving us not only a better view of her sexy behind, but also a great view of her barely-covered pussy. We also noticed that the g-string was wet. What a turn on sight!!!

While she was still bent over, she reached up and grabbed the strings and slowly began peeling off the garment. My cock is now saluting the parade as we are able to see her nicely shaved and wet pussy. She stepped out of the g-string and tossed it at me. I can smell the scent of her sex. She moved her feet apart and reached back to caress her legs in a slow, sexy motion. She continued on to her pussy, gently rubbing in circular motion, her wetness was very visible. She then used two fingers to spread her lips apart for us to see. She then stood up and turned around and resumed dancing to the music and rubbed her hands
all over her naked body while we watched with a hard-on. When someone would reach out and try to touch her, at first she would move just out of reach, but soon she wasn't moving until just after they made contact.

She went back to her bag and pulled out a can of whipped cream. She then went up to each guy, put some whipped cream on her nipples, and leaned forward so he could suck and lick it off. Most of the guys stuck to her plan, but as I was licking the whipped cream off, my hand reached between her legs and started feeling her pussy. She slowly ground her pussy against my hand, my cock got even harder. I was amazed how wet she was and slipped a finger inside her as she moaned out loud. I continued playing with her as I licked her other breast completely clean and then reluctantly released her. It was then that I realized that all the guys had freed their hard cocks from the confines of their pants and were slowly stroking them. I also freed my cock from my jeans. My rock hard cock felt like exploding with the slightest touch. I glanced at the others and realized they were in the same state as I was.

She went back to her bag, pull out a vibrator and she moved over to the centre of the room, lay down with her feet facing us. She brought the lifelike vibrator to her mouth and began licking and sucking it. After that she turned it on, and began to rub the tip over her tits, paying close attention to her nipples, then sliding it slowly down her stomach. When it reached the little patch of hair left on her pussy, she pulled her legs back and apart and ran the tip of it down between her lips. We were all mesmerized as she ran the head of the fake cock between her lips, over her clit, and all over her pussy. We were even more mesmerized as she began working the large vibrator between her lips and inside. Slowly she worked a little more then a little more inside herself, pulling it back out a little, then pushing it deeper inside. Soon she had its entire length buried in her pussy and then began to have a tremendous orgasm. She looked incredibly sexy as her body shook from the intense spasms.
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1) Should I carry on?
2) For those bros who got power to up and thinks that I deserve to be up. Please up me points. Many, many Thank you.

Spurslover
09-06-2006, 05:18 PM
Thank you those who have zapped me. U think u r good, that's your opinion. I am working hard here. I appreciate ppl please let me know if my hard work is worth zapping. I am now telling shouting my heart out THANK YOU FOR ZAPPING ME!!!

Please be reminded that this is a forum that want ppl to be straight forward with our comments. I am trying very hard to do as per the code of conduct here. If I have done anything wrong, please help to remind and guide me, not just zap and zap. It is not as if I am the type of ppl who comes here to spy.WTF!!! I good to bully is it?!!! Zap me for that. Thank you.

fat29
09-06-2006, 05:27 PM
Bro Spurslover,

Thank you for starting and writing the story. Is this story real?

I think you'll be better off by being more restraint. One who is restraint will grow from strength to more strength and reputation points are but only man made ego enhancing instrument. If you are given, take it and be happy, otherwise, live and let live.

I will up you by the little power I am endowed with when my powers return. Only 2 points, nothing more, nothing less.;)

++...gal...++
09-06-2006, 05:39 PM
pls continue leh bro... nice story.

Criminalz
09-06-2006, 06:16 PM
bro...personal opinion.

If you wan to share your story telling skill, just do it..dun write halfway and then ask people if you should carry on...or say things like you see whether can carry on or not base on the points you get..

kinda defeat the purpose of having this forum...here is about sharing..so if you wan to share...dun ask for anything i return...you will be surprise with wat you get when you dun ask...

anyway, just keep writing.

omega_x
09-06-2006, 06:23 PM
Sorry, can't help but LOL... Zapped until 1 point :eek: :o

beachbozs
09-06-2006, 08:56 PM
nice story brother.carry on :D

fat29
09-06-2006, 08:58 PM
Bro Spurslover, as promised, I have upped you. Hope the rest who enjoyed your story will do likewise.

Thanks for writing.

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 09:13 AM
I think you'll be better off by being more restraint. One who is restraint will grow from strength to more strength and reputation points are but only man made ego enhancing instrument. If you are given, take it and be happy, otherwise, live and let live.

Bro fat29,

You spoke like a wise man. Would like to thank you for your advice. I admire and respect seniors like you, who are willing to lead/guide and encourage newbies like me. It's my pleasure to learn from people like you. If I cannot come up with good stories, at least I will try to source and share with all bros.

Thank you for the advise and the points.

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 09:17 AM
bro...personal opinion.

If you wan to share your story telling skill, just do it..dun write halfway and then ask people if you should carry on...or say things like you see whether can carry on or not base on the points you get..

kinda defeat the purpose of having this forum...here is about sharing..so if you wan to share...dun ask for anything i return...you will be surprise with wat you get when you dun ask...

anyway, just keep writing.

Thank you Bro Criminalz for your advise. It will help me with future post. I think you are also a wise senior. I am here to learn. Hope to learn more from seniors like you and Bro fat29.

Kum sia many many...

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 09:21 AM
I would like to express my thank you to the following Bros for their support:
1) fat29;
2) ++...gal...++;
3) Criminalz;
4) Omega x; and
5) Beachbozs.
Hopefully will be able to come up with another part by noon for supporters.

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 11:12 AM
As promised, just manage to rush out the next part out before noon.

Part 3
As she was coming down from her orgasm with the vibrator still deep inside her, one of my friends stand up, and walk over to her. She opened her eyes, smiled, and reached out to grab him by the cock. She slowly stroked his shaft and, as a big drop of pre-cum formed at the tip, she pulled him closer and stuck her tongue out to catch it. She let a string of wetness stretch between her lips and his cock, then moved back towards him and ran her tongue over his cock head. She proceeded to give him a fantastic blowjob as the rest of us watched in amazement.

As she was taking his shaft into her mouth, one of the other guys got up and removed his pants too, then kneeled between her legs, pulled the vibrator slowly from her, and began eating her pussy in earnest. This just caused her to suck on my other friend's cock harder and faster and before long he was moaning and warning her that he was going to cum. I couldn't wait to see how she'd respond.

With a loud moan he thrust forward and began to shoot his hot cum into her willing mouth. At first she tried to swallow it, but then she started to have an orgasm of her own from having her pussy licked and pulled it from her mouth, causing his cum to spray onto her mask, lips, and cheeks.

The guy that was licking her moved up and aimed his cock at her swollen pussy. As she looked down between her legs and saw what he was about to do. She looked past him at me, smiled, then reached down and spread her pussy lips for him! I was very turned on by the whole sight.

He placed the head of his cock between her spread lips and pushed gently forward, the head slipping easily inside. She released her lips as he slid the entire length of his cock into her with one long push.

Just then I leaned forward to suck on her tit. I moved up to give her a kiss. She had licked her lips clean of cum by this point, so I gave her a deep passionate kiss as she moaned into my mouth. I moved down to take her other nipple between my lips.

She could no longer hold back her moans of pleasure. The guy sucking her other breast decided it was time to change places and stood up to offer his cock to her mouth. She was really good at sucking cock, but this seemed even too big for her to handle. She licked at the head and gradually began working the shaft into her mouth.

When she had managed to get about half of it in, the guy in her pussy couldn't take any more and with a loud moan, pulled his cock out and began spraying his hot cum all over her stomach and pussy. She had one hand wrapped around the cock she was sucking, so with the other she reached down and began rubbing the fresh cum into her skin.

This seemed like a good time for me to change positions, so I stood up and got between her legs, sliding my cock into her with one swift motion. I just held it there for a minute and watched as she continued to try and take more of that big cock into her mouth. She'd back out a little to catch her breath, then slide it in as far as she could, getting a little further each time. I held my cock still inside her until she'd managed to get the entire length into her mouth.

Once she'd done this, she began sucking in earnest and I began to move quickly in and out, knowing that I wouldn't last long no matter what I did. I was way too turned on and figured I'd quickly be ready for a second round.
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ahbengsony
10-06-2006, 11:23 AM
:D pls continue. can really imagine that i am also in the room watching. Great illustration... .Upz you too.

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 11:36 AM
:D pls continue. can really imagine that i am also in the room watching. Great illustration... .Upz you too.

Thanx Bro ahbengsony,

Will be updating the next part on Next week.

hardcoremayhem
10-06-2006, 11:42 AM
nice story bro. but being the bachelor boy, u should have 1st blood for bbbj and cim and fxxk! :D

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 11:55 AM
nice story bro. but being the bachelor boy, u should have 1st blood for bbbj and cim and fxxk! :D

Thank you Bro hardcoremayhem for your support. Like the theme in SBF, it's the spirit of sharing, right...:D

Spurslover
10-06-2006, 12:01 PM
To those senior bros who wants to zap me for my request for points at the end of Part 2,

Please give me another chance. I have learnt my lesson and would like to move on from there. Hope to have your leniency. I will try my best to bring in good stories to share and will not expect any return, as I now knows that hard work will bring good returns. Sorry for any inconvenience and disturbance. Thank you.

omega_x
10-06-2006, 05:27 PM
Not bad sia. You gained a 130% in points since yday :D

hokkienguy
10-06-2006, 11:43 PM
Uped u too (last few days .. i cant remember liao)... for ur good story...:D

ahbengsony
12-06-2006, 08:33 AM
well, hope that you dont end the story with " omg, she is my future wife!!!!":D cos why i conclude this ending ? One paragraph from your posting!!!

Spurslover
12-06-2006, 12:35 PM
Part 4
She looked so incredibly hot with that big cock in her mouth and her breasts moving back and forth as I pushed and pulled. As I suspected, it didn't take very long before I was ready to cum.

I wanted to pull out, but I didn't have the willpower and began cumming deep inside her. I stayed there for a few moments and watched her sucking and licking. She take it out, lick the underside, and then lick and suck on his balls. Reluctantly I withdrew and sat back to see what happened next. Did she have enough or was she able to keep going?

Almost as if she'd read my thoughts, she pulled the cock from her mouth and stood up. I can't describe how
sexy she looked with nothing on but a mask and high heels, glistening with a combination of sweat and cum. I figured she was going to get her things together and leave, but instead she moved the coffee table off to the side and guided the guy who she'd been sucking to lie on his back on the floor. Was she going to do what I thought she was going to do?

She straddled him, reached between them to grab his cock, and began to rub the head between her lips. This alone seemed like it might make her orgasm, but she placed it at the entrance to her pussy and slowly it began to disappear inside her. The rest of us watched amazed as she worked this huge cock into her tight little pussy. She steadily pushing further down onto it until she had the entire thing inside her.
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ahbengsony
12-06-2006, 12:41 PM
i want more . more .more. haha:D

Spurslover
12-06-2006, 05:27 PM
Part 5
All three of us that had been watching this were rock hard again. The other two stood up and went over on either side of her to get some attention, but I wasn't sure she'd be able to do anything other than ride the monster that she was now straddling.

Full of surprises, though, she reached out and took a cock in each hand and began to stroke them as she started to move up and down on the cock beneath her. Once she got into a steady rhythm, she began alternately sucking on the two cocks in her hands. Soon it was even too much for her to concentrate on and she released the two cocks in her hands and started to move quickly up and down as the guy beneath her met her thrust for thrust.

Her moans echoed throughout the room as she reached her climax, causing the guy she was riding to reach his peak too. They were a blur of movement as they both came at the same time, finally slowing to a halt. She lay down on his chest to recover for a moment, giving me an even better view of his still hard cock in her swollen, throbbing pussy. I stroked my own cock as I waited to see what would happen next.
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ahbengsony
13-06-2006, 08:05 AM
is it your own experience or thru those sex novels ???? who cares:D Love the story. more.more.more.more i want........

Spurslover
13-06-2006, 08:30 AM
is it your own experience or thru those sex novels ???? who cares:D Love the story. more.more.more.more i want........

A little bit here and there. Sorry if the story is not professional enough. Btw the last part should be up soon. After that I will be posting stories under Bro Celica's thread "Sharing Sex Stories". Hope to have your support too.

For those seniors who have not left your name when you zap people, thank you for your gutless contribution.

Thank you to those seniors who have upz me for this story. Hope you guys enjoy the last part.

Cheers.

Spurslover
13-06-2006, 08:45 AM
Final Part
After a few moments, she sat up slightly and began to withdraw his cock from her pussy. Their combined juices began to leak from her pussy and onto his balls. Instead of standing up, she moved off of him and kneeled beside him, then motioned for one of the guys she'd been sucking to come over to her mouth. She began to suck on his cock with the obvious intent of making him cum.

I looked at her kneeling in front of me and was about to move in when the other guy beat me to it. He quickly slipped his cock into her drenched pussy and began to fuck her with the same rhythm that she was sucking with.

I moved to the side and watched her tits swaying beneath her and she slid back and forth on these two cocks. Not surprisingly, it didn't take either of them long to cum. The guy in her mouth came first with a series of loud grunts. She tried to swallow it all, but some of it leaked out of her mouth and down her chin.

A few moments later the guy in her pussy cried out and pulled his cock out just in time to shoot his cum all over her back and ass. Her arms gave out from under her leaving her kneeling there with her ass in the air and her pussy begging to be filled.

I quickly moved into place behind her and slid my cock inside her with one quick motion. I thrust quickly back and forth, looking down to watch as my own cock slid in and out or her. I could tell by her moans and motions that she still had another orgasm left in her. I tried to pace myself in the hope that we could finish together.

Fortunately, she was just about there and I picked up my pace and thrust as deep as I could, knowing my balls were slapping against her clit. This time I vowed I'd pull out when I came, so as soon as she started to cum, I pulled my cock from her pussy and shot my hot cum all over her ass and pussy. Just to make sure she was satisfied, I rubbed the head of my cock over her clit and along her lips, smearing our cum all over her pussy and giving her another mini orgasm.

She finally collapsed on the floor and we all sat there silently, amazed at what had just transpired. I looked at the movie still playing and suddenly thought it looked kind of tame. After we rested a bit, I helped her up and she went to the bathroom to clean up. When in the bathroom, she pulled out the mask and I was totally stunned!!!

She put back her mask, put all of her stuff in her bag and put on only her coat. She went around the room and gave each of us a kiss on the head of our cocks before heading for the door and left...

Guess who is she???:eek:

hokkienguy
13-06-2006, 08:46 AM
early morning read ... buay tahan...

Spurslover
13-06-2006, 08:50 AM
early morning read ... buay tahan...

Then you need to settle it fast, Bro. If not u will have a "hard" time for the day.

Cheers.

sean69
13-06-2006, 09:03 AM
"
Guess who is she???
"


let me guess... your wife-to-be?

ahbengsony
13-06-2006, 09:06 AM
buay tahan liao...............arrrrrrrhhhhhhhh! Finished it.Finished it........:D

hokkienguy
13-06-2006, 09:25 AM
Ru hua? wahaha

QUick tell us bro.. simi lang????

++...gal...++
13-06-2006, 02:34 PM
hey bro... faster reveal leh... who is she?

techienator
13-06-2006, 03:56 PM
who's the lady??? kill the suspense...

howler75
13-06-2006, 04:04 PM
OMG.....must be ex GF....:eek:

Probe99
13-06-2006, 09:08 PM
quick!! tell us who iziit!!!

lovelyboy
14-06-2006, 01:29 AM
a few possibiities...
1. wife-to-be
2. 1st love
3. good friend's gf??
4. a fling???

my choice: no 1...:D

Probe99
14-06-2006, 06:58 PM
but i doubt wife..cos he should have known his wife inside out by then right? *wierd*

hokkienguy
14-06-2006, 07:30 PM
ex gal?
neigbour's chio daughter?
Ur Sec sechool, poly, JC teacher?
Ur classmate?
Ur friend's gf?wife?

Spurslover
15-06-2006, 08:45 AM
cannot be "Ho Ching" right????

I like this answer. Power, man... or should I say woman???:confused:

Clonie
15-06-2006, 12:34 PM
skali turn out to be his relative...u know..sister, cousin..etc..mayb his lady boss :eek:

waahaa
15-06-2006, 01:44 PM
maybe it's the ah soh selling char siew png? :cool:

Kongsamiya
15-06-2006, 02:12 PM
HaHahaha .. Future mother-in-law lah...:D

sjb1994
15-06-2006, 02:26 PM
HaHahaha .. Future mother-in-law lah...:D
Hahahaha!!!! I like this the most. But think of it, than her wife-to-be must be underage?

I guess their lady boss or lady displince master.:p

Spurslover
15-06-2006, 03:17 PM
HaHahaha .. Future mother-in-law lah...:D

Bonking daughter & mother-in-law... Hmmm... Sounds interesting... Can consider... Hahaha... :D

sjb1994
16-06-2006, 03:59 PM
So tread-starter, who is she???:confused:

Spurslover
16-06-2006, 04:10 PM
Thank you all Bros for the support...

Bro ahbengsony has broken my "toa bui chee code" in #22.:D

Sorry to disappoint with such an conventional answer. It is more due to my inexperience in writing.

Finally, I hope all bros enjoy the story and I would like to thank all of you, again, for viewing this thread.

yanki1
16-06-2006, 04:53 PM
still no ans ah. patient is running out liao:D

Dicker21
16-06-2006, 05:27 PM
well, hope that you dont end the story with " omg, she is my future wife!!!!":D cos why i conclude this ending ? One paragraph from your posting!!!

Dear Bro yanki
Thread stater Spurlover state that his "toa bui chee code" had been solve in #22.
So the answer is his furture wife.:eek:

Clonie
16-06-2006, 06:45 PM
so wat happen in the end? got confront wife?:cool:

happybonker
17-06-2006, 04:09 PM
While we anxiously wait for the results, 1 interesting clip to share with all....

My advice regarding the below clip....DONT DO IT !!!

http://www.uploading.com/?get=WZ6UT056